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Joe's is undergoing de-renovation About Truespace Archives These pages are a copy of the official truespace forums prior to their removal somewhere around 2011. They are retained here for archive purposes only. Joe's is undergoing de-renovation // Work in Progress 1  2  |   Order by default Post by mrbones // Aug 22, 2006, 11:19am mrbones Total Posts: 1280 Looks really nice Brian, I envision a dark shadowy figure in there somewhere. Post by TomG // Aug 22, 2006, 1:11pm TomG Total Posts: 3397 Looking MUCH better! There is still one change I would make -the three bright areas in the middle (one on the building, then one each on the two pillars) are a little distracting, especially the big bright one on the building. Whether they are correct in terms of light falling on there or not, I would edit those to remove them :) They draw the eye to them constantly, which means the eye is not looking at all the other items in the scene. Even just removing that one bright one I think would be enough, and then it leaves the eye free to wander over the rest of the rather rundown, rough, and slightly forbidding environment (and lets the imagination start creating stories around the visuals!) Thanks for sharing! Tom Post by frootee // Aug 22, 2006, 1:42pm frootee Total Posts: 2667 oooohhh... I don't think I'd stop there for coffee... In fact I think I'd get the Hell outta there! Looks really good Bryan. Frootee Post by TheWickedWitchOfTheWeb // Aug 22, 2006, 3:26pm TheWickedWitchOfTheWeb Total Posts: 858 So much better than the original version. Well done, you should be pleased with yourself. If I was going to be picky, I'd have to say that the ground is still a bit pinky for my liking which makes it feel more like a carpet to me! I assume it's coming from the sign but don't want to start offering suggestions if I'm wrong as it'd be pointless (if it is then I can as I did some neon sign stuff a little while ago and learnt quite a bit!). I see you've changed the angle of the rain to a more straight down. I think the slightly more angled version gives it a more ominous feel as it implies a storm. Only minor points and just my personal preferences. As I said, a vast improvement on the original you should feel all warm and glowy! Post by Rareth // Aug 23, 2006, 4:32am Rareth Total Posts: 149 ok now that looks great. you've tweaked the fall off of the Neon sign so it looks much better. Post by brianalldridge // Aug 24, 2006, 3:28pm brianalldridge Total Posts: 397 Thanks for all the crits and comments, I posted the final version in the image gallery:)

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