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Kitchen
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Kitchen // Work in Progress
Post by Vizu // Apr 25, 2007, 11:57am
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http://www.wire-frame.de/trash/Kitchen4_1.jpg
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Post by 3dvisuals dude // Apr 25, 2007, 12:31pm
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Hi Vizu...
Looks great! You have a very good eye for scale I see. I'm curious though, why did you put the image in the "/trash/" directory? It clearly looks to me like some real modeling time went into that work and it's a good image!
Well done.
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Post by rj0 // Apr 25, 2007, 12:41pm
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Vizu,
Lots of nice things in there. Very much like the flooring, the window, the oven and dishwasher (although the controls seem a tad smallish, but maybe fine), and the general detail level. Definitely getting there.
A couple of notes. The counter top lacks depth. In the direction of the window, the window frame looks almost as deep as the counter top (optical illusion?). Also, the refrigerator almost looks like it is embedded in the wall. Lastly, the 'grooves' between and within appliances and cabinets all look perfect and identical, somehow leaving them looking rather flat and CG.
Very much enjoy the scene. Looking forward to seeing more. Best regards.
rj |
Post by W!ZARD // Apr 25, 2007, 9:01pm
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Definitely getting there Visu - I have some reservations about the lighting - both practically and artistically. I'm guessing that as this a WIP you are still planning on adjusting the lights. As they are now the hard edge between the light and shadow on the wall looks artificial to me. Additionally most modern kitchens have lights above the work areas - at the moment it looks like a cook would be often working in their own shadow.
I like the way this is looking otherwise.
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Post by MadMouse // Apr 25, 2007, 9:43pm
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Thats a nice clean render, but I have to agree with W!ZARD about the lighting. |
Post by Nez // Apr 25, 2007, 10:26pm
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Agree with several of the above comments - in particular the lighting (lighting fixed under the wall cupboards or from the extractor hood would be my suggestion), the worktop depth (should be 60cm normally) and the fridge-freezer - should have an air gap between it and the wall or it won't work properly, at least a couple of cm.
Obviously this is in the WIP section, but there's a few other missing things that are kind of apparent - e.g there's no hob under the extractor, no splashback or tiling to the walls (stainless steel spashback might suit this kitchen) and needs some other stuff on the counter (e.g. toaster, kettle, dishes, vase, condiment tins) or other signs of life...
Really nice quality, looking forward to seeing it develop. |
Post by Vizu // Apr 26, 2007, 11:12am
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thanky for comments.
Yes lights, materials and some details not my taste so i try to fix some of youre crits here.
I have add some things in the new renderpart.
http://www.wire-frame.de/trash/Kitchen5.jpg
why in the trash folder ? i don´t know ;) i save all my works there hehe |
Post by Vizu // Apr 26, 2007, 12:28pm
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http://www.wire-frame.de/trash/Kitchen6_1.jpg
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www.wire-frame.de/trash/Kitchen6.jpg |
Post by W!ZARD // Apr 27, 2007, 1:47am
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Ah yes - those shadows look much better now. |
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