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Post by daybe // Apr 22, 2006, 9:44am
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Hey folks me again,
here is a scene I was working 2 weeks ago, it is for a magazine cover and has been accepted, sweet. The characters are posers models, I had orginally created some half mannequiens in 3d myself but the client wanted something different. Anywho they are the boss. I haven't tried to model a human before, would have tried this time but the deadline was pretty tight.
Rendered using TS7 and Vray 1.0.
C&C always welcome although it has been sent to the client.
Cheers |
Post by behzad // Apr 22, 2006, 10:22am
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Nice work daybe! :D |
Post by JPSofCA // Apr 22, 2006, 9:57pm
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That turned out great! |
Post by MadMouse // Apr 23, 2006, 12:12am
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Hi Dave,
Very nice work. I know you said its already been sent to the client but there are a couple of things that caught my eye. IMHO the bag nearest the camera is just crying out for a little more texture work. It looks a little flat compared to the rest of the scene, and the rather attractive young lady outside the window looks a little false. Maybe its the angle or maybe the lighting but something makes here stand out. But hey, if the client's happy and the money's in the bank who am I to criticise:)
With all that said its still a fine piece of work and you should be proud of it.
ATB
Steve. |
Post by KeithC // Apr 23, 2006, 3:48am
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That looks great. I had a chance to check out your site and look at your portfolio; very nice work!
-Keith |
Post by W!ZARD // Apr 23, 2006, 4:33am
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Nice work Dave - I particularly like the way the mannekins look plastic and stiff but the woman in red looks alive.
The only criticism I have is that you get paid for your work and I don't get paid for mine!!;) One day maybe... |
Post by Steinie // Apr 24, 2006, 1:53am
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Nice work! This looked like a project having trickey shadows and reflections and you handled it nicely. |
Post by stoker // Apr 24, 2006, 2:27am
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Nice work Daybe:jumpy: :jumpy: Really like your site aswell !!!!! |
Post by daybe // Apr 24, 2006, 2:54am
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Thanks guys.
Madmouse, the woman outside the store front is a bit off but time was a factor and I only had one shot at rendering, I would have liked to correct it for them but it needed to go to print, however I will correct it for my portfolio. The blue bag in front had a bump map orginally but when it rendered it was all distorted because of some bad U/V mapping on my part, so I had to remove it in photoshop, too bad because you are right.
KeithC, thanks for comments about my website, I have been working really hard on it of late about 75% of the images have been updated in the last year and continue to update them.
Cheers, |
Post by KeithC // Apr 24, 2006, 2:58am
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I like the layout of it; uncluttered, and easy on the eyes while still showing all your work. Very nice.
-Keith |
Post by noko // Apr 24, 2006, 11:26am
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Great image and site daybe, also really like how you take criticism of your work which shows your professionalism. A real pleasure going through your images on your site and hope you get many more clients, I think you will with the quality and effort you put into your work. Great job and much thanks for sharing! :banana: |
Post by splinters // Apr 24, 2006, 11:39am
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I really like your work Daybe and I enjoyed viewing your site...:) |
Post by daybe // Apr 25, 2006, 2:12am
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Thanks guys I appriciate you comments.
I designed the website with the soul purpose of displaying my illustrations so, this is why I used grey as I didn't want anything to distract the viewer from the images themselves. Nothing to fancy just a solid design to showcase my work. This is a typical example of the type of sites I design as well for clients, clean uncluttered look that's easy to navigate.
Noko, my first year in art school helped me develop and thick skin in regards to critiques, all the way through school you could expect your work to be posted up and have everyone have a go at it, can be quite humbling to say the least especially when you think you had created something really great only to find that wasn't the case, which happen on numorous occasions:o . I do find it quite helpful especially here in the TS forums people here tend to constructive when giving comments and there is always room from improvement.
Cheers |
Post by brianalldridge // Apr 25, 2006, 8:39am
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I would try and crit it but there's nothing to crit:( Good job |
Post by xmanflash // Apr 26, 2006, 5:07am
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Hi Dave,
Great site, the Store front picture is excellent too - the (real) woman looks a little off as she does nto have the same lighting (no shadows on the right like the dummies) but you knew that :-)
Im a tech illustrator from a long time ago - trained in the UK - .13 rotring inks and that funny smell from the elipse templates, but hope to get back into it with TS in a virtual environment.. struggling a bit and asking some searching questions of TS version 7, but still with a positive outlook ! |
Post by daybe // Apr 26, 2006, 5:24am
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Hi xmanflash, Thanks for your comments, The woman is a bit off but hey we can't always be prefect right ;)
I remember those days, I still have those things kicking around somewhere, can't bear to toss them as you never know someday i may need them ;). Hopefully everythings works out for you and if you need any assistance please feel free to call on me.
Cheers, |
Post by splinters // Apr 26, 2006, 6:33am
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Hopefully everythings works out for you and if you need any assistance please feel free to call on me.
Cheers,
Likewise....:) |
Post by xmanflash // Apr 26, 2006, 8:36am
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Likewise....:)
Thanks guys - you are going to regret saying that! - theres this fire engine see....:p |
Post by daybe // May 25, 2006, 5:47am
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I have finally got back to this one as well and made a few changes and posted this over at cgtalk at
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=361090&page=1&pp=15
and it looks as if I may have a few more changes to some shaders oh well work is never really complete is it. ;)
Cheers, |
Post by Rareth // May 26, 2006, 3:59am
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wow looks great! |
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