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Post by 2much4U // Dec 16, 2007, 2:22pm

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Hi all! Here's something that will raise eyebrows: A completed workpiece I created. I call it "The Light Within the Dark." What's funny is that it's a song, and that the only places I could think to show it off were the Round Table and the Image Gallery. Honestly, a section of the forum for audio would do quite nicely. I've posted it on Newgrounds.com, so here's the link:


http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/111802


to prove that this was created by me, I'll give a screenshot of the project within the Audition interface.


What do ya think?

Post by Jack Edwards // Dec 17, 2007, 12:46am

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Hi 2Much4U,

I think one of the things you can use to improve the impact of your music is to vary the velocity (how hard the notes are hit) and volume of the notes. That will make it feel more performed and less mechanical.

Good luck on this! :)

Post by Dragneye // Dec 17, 2007, 8:54am

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Great piece. Nice mix, and Jack makes a good point

Post by rjeff // Dec 17, 2007, 9:23am

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Well l 2much..like Prodigy I am gonna need a wire frame to prove to me that you made it. I mean you could have used Photoshop to do all that facny stuff on the screen there!!

Post by butterpaw // Dec 17, 2007, 1:44pm

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lol.. for music.. that is the wireframe :D

Post by TheWickedWitchOfTheWeb // Dec 18, 2007, 1:03am

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that is the wireframe


I think you'll find that was the joke.


Anyway, reminds me of very early Human League. The one thing that instantly stood out to me was the main stab synth. Could do with a touch of chorus or similar to give it a bit more warmth as it's a little cold and weak on it's own.

Post by butterpaw // Dec 18, 2007, 2:58am

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Yeah Witchy, I was joking too.. I guess my sense of humor is a little weird.. :D

@ 2much4u, nice little piece, and the suggestions made above are good ones, a friend suggested Audition to me.. I'd like to get it one day (I use FL Studio Pro) :)
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