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MMC Dec 08
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MMC Dec 08 // Work in Progress
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 4, 2008, 4:57am
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Dont know whare I,m going with this... But I,m in..
Verry creative topic btw... |
Post by Breech Block // Dec 4, 2008, 10:18am
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Great news Ranger! Welcome aboard. |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 9, 2008, 5:49pm
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Just a quick layout... Barely scrached the surface... Not sure whats going to be abandoned in the dumpster... might be grim... But then abandonment could be pretty grim... |
Post by Breech Block // Dec 9, 2008, 8:14pm
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Nice start - looks moody all ready. :) |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 12, 2008, 12:48am
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A little update... Lots more to do... PhotShoped up some signs.. Still needs trash bags and other trash.. and clutter.. and puddles... and whatever got abandoned in the dumpster... |
Post by Mr. 3d // Dec 12, 2008, 1:24am
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Nice Atmosphere. Is that Jimmy Hoffa in there ? |
Post by tahnoak // Dec 12, 2008, 10:04am
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Nice job on this ranger0101 and interesting selection of colors. |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 12, 2008, 11:58am
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Thanks everyone for your encouragement... added some puddles and some bits of trash... lots more to do.. who knew makeing trash could be so much work... Great topic.. great modeling work out.. |
Post by tahnoak // Dec 12, 2008, 1:14pm
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Coming along nicely. Be careful with the texture on the wall. The bricks don't line up at the door opening. |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 12, 2008, 4:08pm
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Good to have many sets of skilled eyes... Fixed wall texture.. added door knob and lock and more trash... so much more to do.. |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 12, 2008, 8:07pm
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a little tweeking in photoshop... |
Post by Mr. 3d // Dec 13, 2008, 1:00am
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I see you abandoned the luster with this view. It reminds me of a black -n- white movie and we're waiting to see someone whose been roughed up to be thrown out the back door ! |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 14, 2008, 4:01am
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Working on compasition... added main charicter.. "The American Unscilled Worker" Gotta make more trash and rework trash in dumpster... |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 14, 2008, 11:30am
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Last one was a bit to dark... |
Post by tahnoak // Dec 14, 2008, 11:53am
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Interesting..is that the unskilled worked propped up against the wall? It is hard to discern the main character from the wall due to the coloring scheme. I love the look, but it's hard to see some of the detail. |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 14, 2008, 11:33pm
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put some more light on the main charecter.. a bit more trash a couple of palletts.. Starting to take shape... |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 15, 2008, 8:37pm
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Added a bit more color... Retextured main charicter... |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 16, 2008, 2:53am
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Washed that coler right back out of there... Tweek tweek tweeken away... |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 17, 2008, 9:48am
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Added more trash.. some csr stops... Got rid of the main charecter.. Hopefully I will have time to make another one.. |
Post by Finis // Dec 17, 2008, 10:18am
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Bet that trash was a lot of work.
This has an interesting style. Sort of old movie like. Kind of comic bookish. Bad photograph look. Not meaning your image is bad but that the work you did with the colors gives an impression of a hastily snapped photo. |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 17, 2008, 5:43pm
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Well this may be it... I think.. What do ya think..? It was a very interesting chalenge... Good Luck Everyone... And as allways thank you all for your encouragement and advise...! |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 18, 2008, 4:17pm
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Final Entery...
Teddy was sure that he and Billy would be together forever... He never imagined it would end like this.. |
Post by tahnoak // Dec 18, 2008, 4:27pm
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Nice job. What drove the drastic changes near the end? |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 18, 2008, 6:23pm
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Not rely drastic changes... More back to my original idea.. which was to have a live baby in the dumpster.. the most cruel and hideous abandonment imaginable... I'm just not skilled enough of an organic modeler to make a realistic baby... So instead of an abandoned child... I had an adolescent abandon childhood... |
Post by tahnoak // Dec 18, 2008, 6:27pm
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Wow, okay...great concept and well done!
I'm with you there on the skill for such things. That is why you won't see any people in my scenes because I am just not even close to being there. |
Post by ranger0101 // Dec 23, 2008, 11:07am
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I was just hopeing I might get a little more feedback... |
Post by tahnoak // Dec 23, 2008, 11:22am
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Understand. Sometimes I think it may be difficult for some to give constructive criticism until they are more comfortable with someone. You never know who might start flaming if you offer a suggestion on a "different" way of doing something which holds some people back from offering suggestions. |
Post by Steinie // Dec 24, 2008, 8:34am
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Ok I'll do a critique on your rendering.
The texturing looks absent on the pallets and probably needed on the paper products (like stains).
The door jam is too flush to the wall, I would have the trim stand out slightly.
The texturing on the dumpster lids are the same on all three. You could rotate the textures to give them some variety.
The tonal quality on this piece is nicely done but the blur was over done making the sign almost unreadable.
I think you could have lead the viewer's eye to the discarded bear better.
You can do this using objects tilted toward the object, camera focus, perspective, unique colors or by centering the view point.
I liked how you handled the theme and see improvements every time you participated. Keep asking for viewer's opinions because they make you better.
Kind of hard for me to critque your work when I didn't get votes myself but the competition was really good. |
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