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Architectural rendering
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Post by daybe // Mar 17, 2006, 9:09am
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Well it would seem I have been on a roll lately, I have some down time at the moment so I have been updating my portfolio. This is a work in progress, still a few details to add and tweak, so I would appreciate some comments or suggestions.
Oh ya while I think of it, the car isn't mine, came with DePak, BKP 3D Car Collection. Rendered with TS7 and Vray.
Thanks for looking. |
Post by splinters // Mar 17, 2006, 9:23am
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Funny but I really like the wall in the foreground with the DOF. Many renders avoid anything intrusive in the frame and you get what looks like a house all alone in a field. This view gives it realism, as if your neighbour is spying on you from their house....it is illegal you know...;) |
Post by stoker // Mar 17, 2006, 11:11am
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I agree with splinters, looks more like a propper image with a wall and road and other stuff in the background rather than a house sat on an empty planet:)
Great Image:jumpy: :jumpy: |
Post by Délé // Mar 17, 2006, 11:24am
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Nice work daybe! I think it looks very good as is. :) |
Post by daybe // Mar 17, 2006, 11:31am
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Thanks folks, I usually try and put something between the camera and the main subject, just makes for a more interesting piece. |
Post by behzad // Mar 17, 2006, 1:57pm
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I like it, but as usual a comment from me, if you look at the sky and the trees the amount of light outside is a bright sunny day, you would require brighter light on casting on the scene.
Also watch the shadows, Is the shadow under the tree from a model or from the background picture. The two squares show shadows going different directions.
Just my 2 cents
Behzad |
Post by daybe // Mar 17, 2006, 2:18pm
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Thanks Behzad, as usual you are correct about the lighting, the shadow however is actually coming from another tree just out of view. |
Post by behzad // Mar 17, 2006, 2:21pm
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great, for a minute I thought it was coming from the tree in the view. :banana: |
Post by W!ZARD // Mar 17, 2006, 6:09pm
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Excellent! Apart from the sky looking slightly too bright I'd say you've nailed this one - looks great. The foreground wall is a nice touch - it breaks the rules of an "ideal composition" which makes it look more real IMHO.
Looks like it could be a nice place to live. |
Post by ronrn // Mar 18, 2006, 5:39am
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It has very good presentation. Nice conceptual design. The background blends well. Though the overall scene could be just a touch brighter, the light and shadows, and reflections are realistic. You've provided proportionate scale. The foreground is a very nice touch.
I must comment on the roof. The roof edges don't appear to be of a real structural material. Maybe thin them down a little and add another offset line.
Overall, good work. |
Post by daybe // Mar 18, 2006, 6:01am
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Thanks Ronrn, I will look into it, I guess my orginal thinking was the make the roof like the rest of the building but I think you idea is more realistic. I will post an update when I get sometime to make some changes. In the meantime this variation is just for fun. Has some possibilities, but it would mean I would have to add some objects inside and find a better background image as I had the shakes when I took it ;).
Cheers, |
Post by KeithC // Mar 18, 2006, 7:27am
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Looks great, I like your placement of the boulders and bushes, except the bush to the left seems like it should go in the corner instead of in front of the window. But that's just my asthetic opinion; maybe bring the smaller boulder out a bit (not too close to the curb though). Enough of my landscaping critique though. Good work!
-Keith |
Post by hemulin // Mar 18, 2006, 7:35am
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Great, I prefer the night time one to the day time one at the moment though.:D |
Post by daybe // Mar 18, 2006, 7:42am
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Ya I must admit, I like the night version as well perhaps once I get the daytime version complete I will work on it. |
Post by hemulin // Mar 18, 2006, 7:50am
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Good to hear! |
Post by daybe // Mar 18, 2006, 7:54am
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I like you tag line by the way. Too true happens to me all the time.:D |
Post by hemulin // Mar 18, 2006, 8:04am
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You're not the only one.:rolleyes: |
Post by noko // Mar 18, 2006, 9:20am
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Very nice Daybe, I don't see too many flat roof dwellings, nice change. Now maybe a silhouette of a women dressing behind curtains ;) will give that neighbore spying or peeping tom look from the wall :) . |
Post by daybe // Mar 19, 2006, 7:27am
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Thanks Noko, This one is finished, but I think I will start to work on the night version now as I think it may work out quite nice, maybe I will use your suggestion and put a women in the window in that one.
Thanks for everyones help.
Cheers |
Post by hemulin // Mar 19, 2006, 9:11am
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I can see this is really going to go somewhere...
You could do a night-time scene with lightening and an old witch at the window.:D |
Post by stoker // Mar 19, 2006, 10:00am
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Lookign forward to the night time one. Maybe it would look good it was really dark with the lights on and a street lamp outside:confused: :confused: Only a suggestion
Great work though:jumpy: :jumpy: ;) |
Post by W!ZARD // Mar 20, 2006, 3:13am
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Nice work - I like the different temperatures of light in the night time scene - the warm tungstun type lights from the house and the cool nighttime ambient light. Good work |
Post by daybe // Mar 20, 2006, 1:46pm
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Thanks W!zard, here is an update, not qute there but getting closer. I removed the little trees from around the house and may do so in the day version of this, doesn't really come across to well.
C&C's always welcome.
Cheers, |
Post by splinters // Mar 20, 2006, 1:54pm
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Nice work as usual Daybe. I like the fact that it is lit quite dim-not trying to look like a showhouse... at night... in vegas...;) |
Post by trueBlue // Mar 20, 2006, 2:04pm
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Daybe: This is looking great! I was gonna suggest landscaping lights the other day. How about a small 3D tree "Japanese Maple" in the dark corner with a wall high lighter. |
Post by daybe // Mar 20, 2006, 2:26pm
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Hey I like that idea, I will see what I can find, Thanks.
Cheers, |
Post by behzad // Mar 20, 2006, 5:40pm
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Nice lantherns, ads a nice touch.;) |
Post by GraySho // Mar 20, 2006, 10:37pm
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Really good lighting. I was playing with nighttime lighting too. If I were you, though I'm not, but if, I would add some walls in the first floor and switch of lights in some rooms, just for some variaty :D |
Post by hemulin // Mar 21, 2006, 3:30am
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Great render, the DOF really adds effect to the realism of the image, as before the car seemed to be letting the image down a bit. |
Post by daybe // Mar 22, 2006, 9:09am
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Thanks for everyones comments, Here is an update. And I guess I would consider these complete as I wasn't going for hyper-realism. I removed the trees along around the outside of the building as I felt they were not working out... looked fake. I think I should have posted this first in the WIP thread sorry for that.
Cheers, |
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